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because in the first twenty pages we have

  • instant-acting pills. Vampires have fast metabolisms, okay stipulated, but do they have pill-triturating gizzards?
  • bats eating carrion. BATS AREN'T BUGS.
  • trematodes identified as fish. wtf.

And I'd let this all go, but the narrator says he's a bio major. Please tell me there's some plot reason, that the parasite has eaten the bio lobes of his brain for its own purposes.
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